The wind teased her veil
Lifting a cloudy corner
To peek at the sun.
Sun Goddess
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The wind teased her veil
Lifting a cloudy corner
To peek at the sun.
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I love this. When I read this, I believe it’s saying that overtime the sad days gets better.
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That is such a unique way to see this! Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Wonderful poem, I love how ethereal it sounds x Great job!
Laura / https://www.laustworld.com/
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Thank you! Ethereal is one of my favorite feels.
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Oooh! I like this! This is great in so many ways because you feel the sun shining at you when the clouds happen to move away, which can be associated with the wind. You have amazing poetic skills, hehe!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
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I was thinking of wind moving clouds when I wrote this. Love that you saw that picture!
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Another amazing poem. This one would be perfect for the beginning of Summer x
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Admittedly, my timing is a little off season-wise!
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