The wind teased her veil
Lifting a cloudy corner
To peek at the sun.
Sun Goddess
The wind teased her veil
Lifting a cloudy corner
To peek at the sun.
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There is one word for this poem: breathtaking.
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Thank you! Sending you 💖
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How beautiful! I love the image as well, very magical.
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Great words as always 😀
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I don’t know why, but this makes me want to tell them the story of Icarus. The sun is beautiful, but get to close and you’ll get burnt
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Well said! I also love a fable about the bunny who shot a hole in the sun.
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I haven’t heard that fable before
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It is an old fable about the sunrise and why you cannot look full-on at the sun. If you are interested, you can check it out at
https://boyscouttrail.com/content/story/rabbit_shoots_the_sun-885.asp
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The image reminds me of Egyptian mythology. It makes for a powerful combo with your poem
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Beautiful way to describe this art piece. I can almost hear the woops as they ride away from here!
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😊 Thank you so much!
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What a clever way to describe this photo!
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I love this. When I read this, I believe it’s saying that overtime the sad days gets better.
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That is such a unique way to see this! Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Wonderful poem, I love how ethereal it sounds x Great job!
Laura / https://www.laustworld.com/
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Thank you! Ethereal is one of my favorite feels.
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Oooh! I like this! This is great in so many ways because you feel the sun shining at you when the clouds happen to move away, which can be associated with the wind. You have amazing poetic skills, hehe!
Nancy ♥ exquisitely.me
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I was thinking of wind moving clouds when I wrote this. Love that you saw that picture!
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Love reading your poems, you have such a way with words. Like the wind “teasing” I’ve started storing some of the phrases in my brain, to try and use in my own writing.
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That is a wonderful thing to do! I jot down odd phrases as they come to me, and most of them wriggle their way into some piece of writing.
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Another amazing poem. This one would be perfect for the beginning of Summer x
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Admittedly, my timing is a little off season-wise!
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